

I think it’s coming together well.
The first couple of episodes were just a barrage of surreal imagery and quick cuts and bits of disjointed narrative, but it started taking more time after about the third episode, sort of backing and filling and connecting all those disjointed bits of imagery and narrative, so we’re getting to know the cast - both the avatars and the people behind them - and learning more about who and what they really are. It’s still relatively surreal and still has a lot of quick cuts and such, but it’s building context so that it’s all making more sense. And most of the sense it’s making is not pleasant - in that at least it’s definitely sort of Lain-ish.

Nice mix of cute and funny, just as I’ve come to expect now.
The whole gimmick of the supposed BL manga being pretty much just shounen action and the admonition that “you have to find BL for yourself” was amusingly meta. And the fact that the flowers that appeared in the background behind each girl’s head were actually real in-universe and you could hear them bouncing off of Poem’s head and burying her in an avalanche made me laugh out loud.
And I smile every time Poem’s mom is on-screen. She’s just so adorable and so sweet and such an ongoing embarrassment for Poem.